Hi! My name's Adri.I'm thirteen years old and I live in Coria del Río,Seville.I have got a brother.His name is Rafa and he is eighteen years old.I also have a dog,and his name is Flipy.I study in the high school:Rodrigo Caro and I'm in year 2.My favourite subjects are Art and English.My hobbies are playing football,painting,listening to music and watching TV.My football team is Sevilla.F.C. and my favourite groups are:Pignoise,El Canto del Loco,Pereza and Lady GaGa.My favourite TV program is ''Sé lo que hicísteis'' because is very funny.This is me:
ok, let's start correcting.
ResponderEliminar,and (you don't usually write a comma before the word and)
My favourites subjects (the adjective favourite does not have a plural form, as the adjective in English doesn't have plural; also in my favourite programmes (program is American English :(
My hobbies are play football/listen to/watch TV (all the verbs must have an-ing ending)
Nice work, but it should be better, try to correct the mistakes. Thanks!!!!!!
Estrella,I have already corrected.I hope that now this good. ;)
ResponderEliminarmy favourites groups are... (favourite is and ajdective... so no plural for it: just FAVOURITE).
ResponderEliminarMuch better :)